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don't pick flowers, no matter how pretty they look
when you do that, you pluck it from its life force in the prime of its fragrant youth
after that, it doesn't matter how much love and nurture and attention you give it
the petals always wither, shrink, and die,
leaving something that could perhaps be pretty still,
in some saddening, distorted way.
the picked blossom will never mature to bear sweet fruit,
swollen and ripe and oh-so-satisfying
no, it will only pass out of its delicate perfection,
to be discarded when it is no longer pretty.

trust me, i would know.

i was one of the prettiest flowers
before you came along and picked me.
:iconcrazysingergirl:

Author's Comments

flowers always die eventually. it's only a matter of how.

unless the flower is fake, of course.

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:iconspazzztic:
I need to show this to my sisters so they stop picking flowers on hikes. xD

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"I used to have Mad Cow's disease, but I'm alright nooooooooow."

- Billy Connolly
:icongoddessxofxlust:
wow! this is quite amazing! i love the metaphor for this! i never tell you how much your work is beautiful but here im going to tell you now! i find all of your working inspiring and insightful and they have this certain quality that i love about them. you tend to write a lot of pieces that i can relate to and i love that! and your choice of words make each of them even more lovely...nice job!

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♥ (,`*•.¸( `*•.¸ ¸.•*´ )¸.•*´, )♥
♥´`•.*:+:~ Roxyanna ~:+:*.•´♥

"Together, forever, never apart. Maybe in distance, but never in heart."
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Roxy + Ethan <3
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i hate that sometimes i just want to hold your hand ♥
:iconcoolsockssam:
:omg:

:+fav:

i love the comparison :B

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:iconcrazysingergirl:
xD totally. i got the idea when i picked two tiny blossoms from the trees in my backyard. [they're the kind with a gazillion little blooms all over the branches =D] so anyway, that was in the morning, and by evening they'd already wilted =(
and the ones on the trees are still perfectly fine.


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:iconspazzztic:
Awww... It reminds me of that beta fish that won't die, even when we try to mercy kill it.
Wait, that was wrong...


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"I used to have Mad Cow's disease, but I'm alright nooooooooow."

- Billy Connolly
:iconcrazysingergirl:
:blushes:

thanks

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making paper wishes and glass dreams

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:iconfallenfromgrace17:
Metaphor! METAPHOR!! *flails around like the loser I am*

(I think I'm a bit of a freak when it comes to good metaphors being used. *happy sigh*)

:heart:

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So let me get this straight. You want to fly on a magic carpet to see the king of the potato people and plead for your freedom..... and you're telling me you're completely sane? (Arnold Rimmer from Red Dwarf)
:iconcoolsockssam:
whoa
ive never seen that emoticon before xD

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:iconcrazysingergirl:
WHOA yes that did come out funny xD
'sokay i think i get it!


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making paper wishes and glass dreams

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