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i am one with the grass and my
eyes are fixed on the shifting clouds.
after a while i can no longer differentiate
the cotton candy whites from the
baby-blue backdrop, all floating above me
like phantom memories of your face.

if i looked away to the trees, the earth--anything, really
i could refresh myself and regain the focus
to see properly upon returning my eyes skyward,
but i am listless.

i stare at the softened periwinkle-and-alabaster
rorschach spots blurring into each other like
blended oil pastels in the heavens, and i exhale
into the silence of the mosquito-specked air.

i waste far too much time trying not to think of you.
:iconcrazysingergirl:

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it just sort of came out. not too sure if it did so coherently.

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:iconiluvocnj2006:
Wonderful!
One of my favorites...actually, I think I say that about all you work. :D

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:iconozanarusyra:
Half does, half doesn't. Could be worse.
:iconfallenfromgrace17:
This is quite awesome. I don't care if it's coherent; it makes sense to me.

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So let me get this straight. You want to fly on a magic carpet to see the king of the potato people and plead for your freedom..... and you're telling me you're completely sane? (Arnold Rimmer from Red Dwarf)
:iconcrazysingergirl:
*thinks about it*
well, it could always be worse.


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:iconcrazysingergirl:
xD i'll take that as a good sign!
thanks for the fave, by the way.


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making paper wishes and glass dreams

proud member of of =RawEm0tion, *BleedingHeartsPoetry, ~Critique-Me, =SongofthePoets, and *Writers-Club

icon animation by ~skinnydoodler
icon design by me =]
:iconcrazysingergirl:
=D thank you!

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making paper wishes and glass dreams

proud member of of =RawEm0tion, *BleedingHeartsPoetry, ~Critique-Me, =SongofthePoets, and *Writers-Club

icon animation by ~skinnydoodler
icon design by me =]
:iconfallenfromgrace17:
:D

You're welcome, btw. :P

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So let me get this straight. You want to fly on a magic carpet to see the king of the potato people and plead for your freedom..... and you're telling me you're completely sane? (Arnold Rimmer from Red Dwarf)
:iconiluvocnj2006:
You're welcome!

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And so we know and rely on the love God has for us.
God is love. Whoever lives in love lives in God, and God in him. ~1 John 4:16

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:iconnuttymshrm:
so pretty. remember when we did that at the party on wednsday? i love just laying back and looking at the sky.

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